Ma'douk | Stray Dog RP | Forum Analysis

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MA'DOUK

(experienced or hardened by life)

a stray dog roleplay set in modern day

Ma'douk is a literate stray dog drama that takes place in a fictional, modern day city known as Kah'ren. The story is centered around the lives of four packs of strays, but you can earn the privilege of playing other animals such as pets, wolfdogs, cats, and foxes.

Here are some of the things we have to offer:

∙  A unique in character social system to make ranking up easy. No need to hassle with high rank try outs. Your character will rank up through playing and being noticed. Everyone gets a chance!

∙  A player driven plot. We have special chats devoted to player discussion of the plot. It's not decided by staff, it's decided by you taking part!

∙ War and drama. There's always something going on in Kah'ren. War, drama, catnip drug deals, family feuds...

∙ Premade characters. We have many premade characters available for adoption, some with gang reputation already in the bag!

HOME ∙ plot ∙  Discord ∙  advertise

template by punki of adoxography/Picture by pexels.com

Seeking opinions on my stray dog roleplay! Some of the questions that I have are these:

Is navigation simple enough? How easy is it for you to find anything?

Lore and packs engaging? 

Advertisements eye catching? 

Graphics/layout eye catching? 

Anything else? 

Thanks!!

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Your site is so beautiful! I love looking at it! Everything is really well organized too. I am going to TRY to give you a list of ten notes, but I am not sure I can!

1. There is something wrong with the map for Kah'ren. I tried viewing it in Chrome and in IE. It worked better in IE, but it still didn't work. When I scroll, parts of it disappear or try to crawl up under the text above it.

2. NPCs - your site is too beautiful for that text to be right up on those images. How dare there be even the slightest imperfection!! Kidding, but not kidding. Your site is so pretty that jumps out immediately and is unpalatable.

3. I love that you have one main role play board and a few sub boards. It keeps things tight. However, with only one board showing for Roleplay, I almost missed it. I would rename the category "Roleplay" or something since the board is already named Kah'ren.

4. This is almost too nit picky, but I am running out of notes. It would be nice to see descriptions for all of the RP sub-boards...or maybe parts of the map? I don't know how feasible that is b/c I couldn't see the map, but having each territory map could potentially be kinda cool to fill those big blank areas...but they do look inconsistent since you have a description for Neutral Territory.

5. The ranking system is a little complicated, but manageable. It might make some people pause, but that is kinda what it is there for...to discourage jumping ahead of yourself in a new site.

6. When reading a thread it is a little jarring for there to be a template, and then no template, but that is just me. The templates for the characters are making me drool...great use of that tab plug in!

Ok, that is all I could muster up, it's gorgeous and laid out well and I love it. Your prompts board in Plotting is a fantastic idea! Your use of tabs on open threads to basically turn a thread into a board is brilliant! The Dog Star is adorable and clever. Nice work!

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jairinai Thank you for letting me know about the map issue! I coded it using Firefox and didn't realize that it would look strange elsewhere. I will go and fix that ASAP.

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